Thursday, 26 March 2015

My Learning Goals for 2015

This is how my learning goals have gone so far for this year.
1. complete home work challenges
2. get into Hagley high school
3. be come more confident in maths

1. So far i have not completed my homework challenges 
2. Its only the first term, how would I have gotten in?
3. My level in maths is razing but not yet my confident levels.

Thursday, 12 March 2015

this is my goal for the year

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       My Goals for 2015

  • Complete home work challenges
  • Get into Hagly high school
  • Become more confident in maths 

my wonder writing

WALT use paragraphs correctly in my writing.
In some of the paragraphs I had to ad some more paragraph so that I could follow the rules of paragraphs. these are the rules for adding paragraphs. Add paragraphs when there is a new:
topic or idea

This is the writing I made as a prequel of the novel Wonder

The restaurant dilemma

I watched as the city lights blur together. Then my dad is indicating and we pull into the restaurant. The flickering neon light above advertises a ' Mister Mathews Bar And Diner.' I guess this is where we are having tea. Through the glowing Window I can see an elderly couple having dinner, not bad considering, so I continue through to the interior doors as I continue to scan the room my eyes rest upon a convoy of teenaged students. "Great." teenaged people are the worst. 

By now you're probably wondering what it is that I'm going on about, well... it's my face, I could try to describe it but whatever you're thinking my face is definitely worse. 

This is torture. I can feel the steers boring through my skull, and the whispers it's like they're not even trying to be quiet. "I hear that its a disease. " One whispers.

 " Do you think it's contagious, I don't want to catch it maybe we should leave. "  Another one whispers. Yet they stay seated on the leather covered chairs, whispering.

I need to work on remembering to add paragraphs. When I am writing instead of adding it in afterward. This is not the whole story.

By Shannon Carlyle productions